She sat waiting for him to return home. It was Karwachauth fast, so she was thirsty, hungry and crabby. She was also annoyed that seven years after their marriage, he would choose to ignore the day. He hadn’t called all day. Neither had he come home a little early like he did in the earlier days of their marriage.
It was almost time for the moon to rise, for her to break the fast, but she couldn’t eat or drink until he fed her with his own hands. She wondered if it was worth staying hungry for the long life of a man who didn’t give a damn anymore.
He was all work now, always at office, only returning to eat and sleep. Sometimes, he would play a little with the children but he didn’t have time for her anymore. Did it have something to do with that new pretty girl in his office, Priya? That day at the office party, she seemed too intent to please. Always hovering around him, “Sir this…”, “Sir that…”.
What would she do if he decided to ditch their marriage for this one? She worried with the lace of her red sari–one she had worn for too many years on too many Karwachauth fasts. It was the only decent red sari she had, the colour she had to wear as per the tradition. She hadn’t asked for another. It seemed weird asking for a red dress at her age. That too for just one occasion an year. Not that he noticed anymore anyway.
The bell rang, she almost ran to the door but collected herself together. She didn’t want to look desperate, so she called one of the kids to open the door.
Her husband walked in with a large package in his hand, which he handed to her with a sheepish smile. “Sorry, I’m late. You know how tailors can be. I had to sit there and wait until he finished. I could have called you but I wanted it to be a surprise. You already look lovely, but this shade suits you better.”
She opened the package. It was the perfect red sari ensemble.
So Sweet
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Thank you, Don! 🙂
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Ah, a surprise happy ending! Well done, Shaily.
I am a fan of tradition, but some traditions seem to be outdated and unnecessary to me, including that one.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Thanks Pete! I don’t approve of fasts that are forced on women. But I have always been fascinated by Karwachauth as it shows how far a woman would go to keep her husband safe: stay hungry and thirsty for 15-16 hours. I have seen my mom blush when my father gives her the first morsel of food and the first drink of water. It is a beautiful sight to behold.
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what a lovely ending to a story that could easily have fallen into a ditch 🙂
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Thank you, John. As years pass, most of us forget to say ‘I love you’. But it’s still there buried beneath the layers of responsibilities…
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it;s a beautiful story; I;m glad it ended the way it did —
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Thanks a lot, John! I wouldn’t have it otherwise. 🙂
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