Night spreads its limbs afar.
Sea of darkness looks back at me.
In prayers, I find the Sun.
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Night spreads its limbs afar.
Sea of darkness looks back at me.
In prayers, I find the Sun.
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Beautiful!! A pleasure to read. 🙏
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Thank you, MW! 🙂
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Beautiful. in prayers we see see the sun though it may be darkness. Well shared ☺️🌹❤️
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Thank you, Priti! I have been seeing the sun a lot lately. He seems to rather love me for me… 😀
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Yes 👍 you are welcome. Stay happy and blessed forever 😊🌹
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I’m not religious, but I felt the spirituality.
Nicely done, Shaily.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Thank you, Pete! Lately, I have felt closer to God than ever. He makes me smile everytime I sit down to pray. 🙂
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I like the opening very much; like you I feel the encroaching darkness, a metaphor it seems for the ‘dark night of the soul’ and I love the resplendent last line —
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Thank you, John! I have been feeling very connected to God lately. When I pray I feel his presence around me and the darkness within me dissipates.
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that’s lovely; it shines 🙂
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