I brush my feet on grass
and feel nothing,
no dew, no earth, no grass blades.
.
My bare arms feel neither
the wind nor warmth
of the soft afternoon sun.
.
My senses drowned, strangled
by running thoughts,
shouting, demanding audience.
.
Life tears rare moment
of peace, leaving
me in pieces everyday…
A passing thought in Urdu:
Sukoon nahi hai mujhko marne ke baad bhi,
Ae Zindagi, tu peechaa kyun chhodti nahi!
Translation:
In death, I still find no peace,
Dear Life,
Why wouldn’t you let me be!
Author’s note: What do you think about life?
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I am 85. Thinking about life, past or present makes me smile. Thinking about life in the future…
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Future should be good too! 😃
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wow ! this is strong !
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Finding no peace in death is worrying. Especially as I see death as the only way of finding real peace. Thought-provoking indeed, Shaily.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Thank you, Pete! Where there is desire, there is no peace; no living in the moment; no stopping to look at the clouds and appreciating their shapes. The endless cycle follows us in death, leaving no peace for soul. Kill the desire to be loved and remembered fondly and you will find peace.
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I wouldn’t be without it!
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Absolutely! “Being” is certainly important! 😀 Without being, you can’t feel. However, did you ever feel that the struggle for “Being” took away the “seeing” and “feeling” part of life?
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I think therefore I am… I think.
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😀
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