Author’s note: This is a six-line story. The first line was offered by by Sarada Gray.
It was almost dark when I realised that the four of us were suddenly five. Shivering, I quietly signaled and we cowered in the shadows trying to blend with the walls.
Hiding was the only way to survive these days. I always wanted to fix that broken door but the rest of our group felt it would give our position away.
I knew the ruse could only work so long, because now, with abated breath, we waited for the axe to fall. And sure as death, a teenage scream rented the air, “Aagh, Ghooooooost!”
a blood curdling opening; taut, tense tale —
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Thanks, John! I love turning things around in the supernatural world. 🙂
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Fine, Shaily. A lot of story in that brief writing.
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😀 Thank you, Don! I hope I managed to surprise you! 🙂
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Short, and complete. Nice work.
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Thanks, Darnell! 🙂
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