I don’t like this whole gliding thing.
It makes me nauseous–
not that I can get sick, mind.
But that’s beside the point.
I have been at it for so many days–
I would rather put my foot down
once and for all–
not that I can do that too.
It is the cost of freedom I pay.
My eyes roam to the horizon,
dizzy already–not that I can fall.
I wonder if I can start wandering now.
No one told me the rules.
My feet itch to move…
well, not literally,
but you know what I mean.
No one told me no.
Used to being told what to do,
the freedom to decide scares me.
My heart soars and dips at the thought
of leaving it all behind.
I think I’ll take baby steps…
Ugh! Not literally, I mean.
I turn to look back at me one last time.
Chest heaving on the bed
with the effort of keeping it all together.
Yes, I think I’d rather leave.
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A clever poem as we realise this this person must decide if it’s time to leave their body !
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Thank you! I hadn’t planned it as such. I was just wondering how a spirit might feel initially while it begins to glide. Motion sickness and all that. Rest of it just happened. ☺️
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not familiar with the term ‘gliding’; I assume it’s to do with being given the freedom to decide; and yes, that can be onerous —
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Hey John, gliding as in flying on a glider.
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got it !
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In gliding motion, you feet don’t touch the ground (Did you ever notice Harry Potter’s ghosts?)
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ahhh yes — it’s been a while since my feet did that —
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Hehehe. This story is a person on deathbed. His soul his lingering, wondering if he was allowed to leave.
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ooops. I missed that. Will have another read —
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I guess I made it too vague. But that is the charm of poetry, I guess. It depends on mood of the reader.
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This was a really good one. Got me thinking about lots of things.
Well done, Shaily. Best wishes, Pete.
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Thank you, Pete! It just came out of the blue and I had the net ready to catch it.
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