For months, she hadn’t been stirred.
Suddenly, the ice broke with the unexpected weight and she screamed for help. Melting with the sun as spring approached was something a part of frozen river would accepted as fate. She would have lived a complete life by then. But breaking down early because someone mercilessly stepped on her weakness…that hurt.
So, she screamed for help. But all of them were on their own now as more cracks kept appearing–the stag that had stepped on her continued jumping neatly on the now-broken ice and crossed the river.
The river was now a jumble of fast moving pieces of ice running forward to meet the sea.
Most of them were simply resigned. She struggled against the flow, trying to return to her calm and composed existence, but there was nothing to hold on to.
Her fight was desperate and fruitless. Her screams were drowned in the gurgle of the river just like the few woohoos from others…
Woohoos?!
She turned around and saw another part of the river, clearly enjoying the ride. He had always been far away, closer to the bank. But now he was pushing her, shining with a twinkle. His playful smile dared her to try beating him at the game.
She pushed back and he laughed, pushing her again, tickling where they touched. Soon, they were both laughing as they pushed and touched and tickled and woohoo-ed down the river.
Not sure how far they reached before they melted but they certainly never stopped to notice.
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what a fun write; I got more out of it after a second read; clever also in personifying the ice floe 🙂
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Thank you, John! It was more than just ice that we are talking about here. Life keeps throwing us around. We only have two choices–we can either mourn or enjoy the ride.
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yes, I go for the second too 🙂
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great ending and great fun; funny how things sometimes work out —
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So true, John! Seen it and been it. I don’t care if I am melting now, I have lived a life!
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yes !!!!
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Great work, Shaily. I was there, in the river.
Best wishes, Pete.
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Thank you, Pete! Life throws us around all the time, the best we can do is enjoy the ride 😄
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